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Hot off the press, apologies for typos and badness! xD

In this episode: Darcy speaks French! Morgy thinks about history again! Neil almost vomits. Situation: Normal.

And a bit more about Toric, according to Morgy. And the Cloud, in dream land, again, and the Voice. Who is the voice? What do they want, or do they want only to help Toric? And Toric's childhood, in THIS novel! But only a sentence or two. Heh heh. I'm evil.

Coming up Next! Morgy gets his wish of not making a stop in the Between. NOT!! Hahahahaha.
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keyanadrake Jun 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Finally got back to where I was reading. I didn't remember this scene, I like it. Particularly the squishy bit with Toric having a friend. :)
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:iconlunaticstar:
Oh yeah, I have hecka about Cass written. And since I'm a crossover champ / lazy motherfucker, Cass from TDST is basically Toric's friend, too.
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keyanadrake Jul 1, 2012  Professional Writer
XD Cross overs for the win!
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keyanadrake Aug 31, 2011  Professional Writer
:3 That was really cool. I enjoyed that. Next?
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:iconlunaticstar:
Doesn't exist. :D To be continued ONE DAYYYYYYY.
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keyanadrake Aug 31, 2011  Professional Writer
:( One day? Aww.

Aw well. :3
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:iconlunaticstar:
Yep, you know how these things go. OiS got an okay following and I hate to dissapoint them. xD But not only that, I know the ending. It would be silly to not bother to write it down. Just not right now.
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keyanadrake Sep 1, 2011  Professional Writer
:3 Yeah, I do. I hope it's not too long. <3
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:iconlunaticstar:
Indeed, indeed!
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Stuff to rectify:
- "...knees draw to his chest" should be "drawn".
- "...we're between to little gravity wells" should be "two".
- "...or was simple disinterred in takeoff" should be "simply disinterested" I think. "Disinterred" would mean "dug up" according to my dictionary. Lol.
- "...very little physical queues." Did you mean clues?
- "...split in twine" should probably be "...in two".

Adored these lines: "wherever you go, there you are" and "best to be bright-eyed and bushy-tailed for one's next brush with a horrible death." And boy did this say a lot about Torric's feelings for Neil: "...rile some companionship out of the boy." Loved that. Inspired bit of text, woman.

Oh man, these space ghosts do intrigue me.
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