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Aw well. :3
- "...knees draw to his chest" should be "drawn".
- "...we're between to little gravity wells" should be "two".
- "...or was simple disinterred in takeoff" should be "simply disinterested" I think. "Disinterred" would mean "dug up" according to my dictionary. Lol.
- "...very little physical queues." Did you mean clues?
- "...split in twine" should probably be "...in two".
Adored these lines: "wherever you go, there you are" and "best to be bright-eyed and bushy-tailed for one's next brush with a horrible death." And boy did this say a lot about Torric's feelings for Neil: "...rile some companionship out of the boy." Loved that. Inspired bit of text, woman.
Oh man, these space ghosts do intrigue me.