I watch 20 minutes of the Science Channel and this madness comes to mind. Thank GOD because `Memnalar
's contest is almost over and I haven't entered anything in forever or actually written
anything in forever that's not a long thing, so here we are!
There's a lot of shout outs in this. The EXTREME MAIL DELIVERY of MSPA's Homestuck, for one. And Rose's mom's scarf. And the word Rose. >_> Yeah, okay, anywho... There's lots of plot points that sort of loop around, or negate each other. Or at lest they should.
So anywho, free crit this. Help me make it pretty before the contest ends. Tell me what you think. Tell me especially what you think the package was.
German corrections thanks to *Siobhan68