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Prev: [link] Next: [link] edit: Fixed thanks to =Kira73 and *denlm's suggestions. I have other edits for previous chapters, but haven't posted many of them. Mostly they're small things. Is it wrong to retcon a whole character into the story at this point? D: I realized how much of a ridiculous mafia boss Ed is without mooks! So I made a mook! The next section will be narrated by him, and another section will be lolretcon'd in probably somewhere around ch 7-ish.  Honestly it's weird, I think Andre Capriccio has been the spice that's been missing from Drowned the whole time. He's not a freak, or some religious nut, or anything, he's just a goon with a gun, a fierce case of the revenge bug, and is a pretty good shot for a regular-ish joe. The instant I thought him up, the name popped into my head, and he speaks. He really does. I wonder what that says about me... - - - Er yeah, in theory I should be on a roll for this chapter, but game trailers are really entrancing. This year's E3 is full of fun things. Anywho! Alex again. And a lot of fleshed out re-hash of things you should already have been suspecting, and official "i quote myself" confirmation that Alex was the narrator of the prologue. If you somehow didn't get that, he is. Plus we visit a familiar place...interesting to go to the same place with a character who's a different age, occupation, and err ' psychological state' (heh) than Ed, Wolfe and Billy, the previous narrators. So, the siege of Ed's haunted mansion will continue next time. You read, you comment. You have brain, you crit. Comments
 You really have a way with words
 Sry, I just came back from 3 days LARPing as a GameMaster, so I'm not in condition to critique it properly  Rest up. I've never been a GM but I hear it's tough work, from my GM who whines a lot. A LOT.
Thanks for reading!-- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly. I'm not whining, because players were super, place was super and it alltogether was wonderful. But I'm so tired (3 hrs sleep or even less for every night of 3 days) and didn't had time to eat and 'cause of that hit my head several times because my awareness was down and finally almost poked my eyes out (but thankfully escaped only with a bruised forehead and aching eyes). Not to mention emotional rollercoaster (3 very different NPC's to play and one _very_ emotional almost-npc). But I'm alive, purring inside because of all epic moments in game and reading your text was a real treat. Maybe I can understand and connect with it better, because I'm quite tuned in on emotional and visual descriptions because of game.
Sounds like a blast.
 Except the bruised head part. XD -- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly.  ::shivers:::Wow...
-- "The question isn't who is going to let me; it's who is going to stop me."- Howard Roark *sneaks up behind you* BOO!
-- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly.  Thank yewwww!!! I will do more. It's in the works, I just get distracted so easily these days! Doesn't mean I've abandoned my lovely OC's to their murky fates. Heehee.
-- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly. Ahah, I know the feeling! I am supposed to be working on a novel that is 3/5ths done, but I keep getting distracted by painting and RP...
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