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Next: [link] Part two. Meet Lu, the intrepid reporter. I hope she's likeable, she's not going to get impaled / shot / hung / burned / drowned / kidnapped any time soon. Harry on the other hand, who knows. He's expendable. >.> This wasn't as fun to write as the first chunk, but it was okay. Just an introduction, and a few theories about what happened the previous night. Comments
 Definitely not a drinker if half of a rum and coke is doing her in! Chatting with a "traumatized whore" is always a good pick me up, though. Heh.
Caught a couple of possible typos. "a kid in ski coat in summer." --read sort of odd to me. A kid in a ski coat maybe? I dunno. "she couldn’t quit explain" --maybe quite? -- -David 'Bat' Ayala  •-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-• My new mission statement: Hulk SMASH! Yep and yep on the typos.
 I can stare at something for hours and not see them. Elusive buggers.And I'm sure I'll get around to the traumatized whore eventually, its sort of a planless just for fun bit of writing, and I keep spinning off onto other characters, all noir cliches.  -- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly. Don't worry, I can relate, I'm king of all typos. I understand, too. I can stare for hours, and only see what I meant to type -- not what actually came out. Then I feel all dumb like.
-- -David 'Bat' Ayala •-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-• My new mission statement: Hulk SMASH!  I can't believe I am about to repeat this line -- and only to point out the typo: "...like a unclaimed fart..." Eeeeew. BTW, that would be AN unclaimed fart.
Now a line I adored: "...like a ribbon on a beauty pageant winner..." I can see why you didn't enjoy writing this one as much as the first, but it doesn't show. It reads like you were having the time of your life, so we did too. Good one. rofl. I toyed with the fart line a bit, and decided to keep it. I fully intend to have way more fun than Ahren lets me (Flappy: *frown*) with metaphors and whatever. I'll just let them dribble out like boogers from a sick baby's nose. Now I just need to get back to the action! It's about a mysterious assassin and good people in a corrupt world, why are they standing around TALKING? (Flappy: cuz its you.) *slaps Ahren*
thanks. -- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly.  You are just too much fun, girl. You let them dribble while you write; I'll carry a hanky while I read. Now back to work. Get that nose to the grindstone. So to speak. Poking readers with my sharp nose? ('<_' )
-- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly. Ouch!
 I read the first bit, thought it so enticing that I went straight to THIS, but didn't leave a comment when that little "Next" button sat waiting for me in the author's comments.
But yeah, I AM reading this, thought you should know Lu? Yeah, quite likeable in that "in your face way" that you kinda love to hate but at the same time really do like... I may have been on crack when I wrote that sentence.  But Harry's expendable? Nuuu! He's adorable!I'm on sleepy crack. Must sleep! X.x Will read more tomorrow when I ditch my math class!  -- "You will forever be my Gargoyle." "I am Wendell Carmen. And I killed Jezebel Gibson." |
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