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Prev: [link] Next: [link] Erm yeah! I mentioned that I would be adding in more chapters to the past. They don't change the current story. But, if I'd waited longer to add them, they would have. So better now than later! So, to recap what's happened so far in the story, in case you can't remember that far back, Alex has began his crusade against all things mafia. Eduardo, enraged, set up a meeting between his and his brother's top guys. Alex shows up, slaughters the lot of them, which leaves Eduardo to think that his brother indeed has declared open war on his regime. He sends Andre in to take revenge... But it seems Andre isn't alone.  And do you beleive that only 7 days have passed so far in the ENTIRE STORY? Well not this point, this is actually um, the 4th night. This is what I get for refusing to flashback or forward. Slowness! But these guys have really busy days. Phew! The keyboard's still smoking from this one. Feel free to point out terrifying yet inevitable errors. Comments
 This is as ever great, and I love the touch of detached humour at the beginning with Shandra. The only critique I have is your use of the word "decimated" - it's extremely pedantic of me, but it actually means "reduced by a tenth" rather than "destroyed" and it bugs me here. "Devastated" or similar would work better, I think.
--  It's not the end of the world... Lol I never thought about that! According to dictionary.com, it means either kill every 10th person, or destroy almost compeltely. Not quite exactly 1/10th for the destruction definition. xD
-- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly. I guess it must've come to mean "destroy completely" but it still... sort of annoys me. Perhaps I am just being ridiculous as a student of Latin - it's originally from decimation, one of the Roman army's more severe punishments - where one man in every 10 of the offending unit/legion/whatever would be put to death.
-- It's not the end of the world... Ahhh I studied, or was forced to study, the roots back in 10th grade.
It was fun, actually! But yeah, words change. I honestly don't think about the roots much anymore.  -- If wishes were horses, we'd all be eating steak. - Jayne, Firefly.  Shandra Stahl sat squarely on his hips, rocking him like a kayak. ...LOL!!!1111.
  Damn :snort: :snicker: THAT was funny. Heehee yeah. Frickin' nature girl.
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